Saturday, December 8, 2007

# 8 - Dangers of Sound Sleeping - The Hijacking-I

Willie was traveling on a plane for the first time. He went inside the plane to look for his seat. According to the boarding pass his seat was 11B.

He went to the row 11. Due to a strange quirk of fate he had always been given a window seat whenever he had travelled in a bus or a train. So quite naturally, he assumed 11B to be the window seat.

Due to another aberration in his fate which would freakishly dramatically alter the course of his life, someone was already sitting by the window.

‘Excuse me; I think you have occupied my seat’ said Willie as gently as possible. This was the first time he had stepped inside an airplane and he didn’t want to annoy anyone.

The other person measured Willie from top to bottom, and then casually replied ‘But why do you think so?’

‘Hmm... I don’t know may be the boarding pass says so that’s why?’ Willie replied equally casually.

‘What does your boarding pass say?’ asked the other person.

‘It says 11B’ Willie was still standing all this while.

‘And what does your boarding pass say?’ asked Willie

‘11A’

This other person was Rick Shaw. He was also traveling on a plane for the first time.

Both had well understood that 11 meant the row number but they hadn’t been able to figure out that the alphabets corresponded to a particular seat in a row.

They thought it was a conspiracy. How could two persons be assigned the same seat and that too in the same plane?

So they both started to brainstorm about how to reveal the conspiracy and resolve this seat issue.

Willie was still standing, and so he was all the more eager to get done with this as in a few minutes the plane would start to fly and he didn’t want to fly to wherever he was flying to standing all through the journey.

‘I have an idea’ said Rick excitedly.

‘What?’ Willie also cheered up.

‘Let’s call the air hostess’ beamed Rick.

‘Have you gone mad? I can’t do that. I can’t ask an air hostess where my seat is. She would think that I am flying for the first time’ gravely said Willie assuming an air of upper-handedness.

Rick then thought if this stranger was not flying for the first time he should have known the seating arrangement. Instead this crazyhead was doing everything than finding his seat.

Anyways Rick couldn’t care less. Even he was flying for the first time and no way was he going to let this butt head know about this. The same exact thought was going inside Willie’s head also.

So they thought about the problem for some more time.

‘I have another idea’ said Rick.

‘I am not going to the pilot’ glumly replied Willie looking rather bored.

‘Let’s get even.’

‘What do you mean?’

‘Let us also plot a conspiracy! We are both going to sit here only and we will not tell anyone about this.’

‘What if they find out?’

Rick thought for sometime and then added ‘Hmm… forget about it for now’. He always preferred to forget about a problem if he couldn’t find a solution.

Finally Willie sat down – on 11B only which anyways he was supposed to occupy.

As they were sitting on seats 11A and 11B only so naturally no one came to bother them. As soon as the plane started to taxi on the runway they both heaved a sigh of relief, and congratulated each other that their conspiracy was working finally.

‘By the way I am Willie.’

‘I am Rick. Rick Shaw. Pleasure meeting you.’

‘So you are also going to Antarctica?’

‘Yeah… I think so.’

They were both going to Antarctica on fully-funded projects.


© 2007 Ankur Shanker
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6 comments:

ankurg said...

eod 7 - 111 -> $16/day.
@this rate total sum could be less than $3000 at the end of your project.

You will have to get your act together and do more.

Best wishes.
Ankur Gupta

test Kapil Goyal said...

I am Rick. Rick Shaw. Pleasure meeting you.
Mast hai Shanker...

Anonymous said...

ahh...well first I'd like to wish you luck, and loads of it. I'm sure you're gonna make it friend. And I guess by the end of 6 months, you will probably polish your skills as much as to become a full fledged story writer...
Well there of course are a few suggestions from my side but remember I am just 17 and not too mature in writing and so please do not get upset if my suggs. are annoying. k?
first, make your stories more attractive. Of course in a short story you do not give details of everything small thing going on but still, something youth catching isn't a bad idea.

small poems? huh? funny ones.

try creating suspense, some zor ka jhatka at the end.

take inspiration from current topics, something recent going on that hasn't been washed apart from the readers' brains.

try hinglish. just as JAM does. it's more attractive, I think. (Bambaiya and bhojpuri aren't bad either, samjhe babua?)

some moral boosting and patriotic stories here and there 'll give it a diverse touch.

and to improve constantly, go for some good short story books.

p.s. no need to reply this one. I won't probably be there very often as I am a student and preparing for jee AND when on a mission like the one you're on, remember :-

TIME IS MONEY,TIME IS SAND...

HOLD IT TIGHT,IT SLIPS FROM THE HAND.

Shreyas

raji said...

Hey Buddy... well Sulekha.com has a tie up with Penguin India where there is a reward of Rs. 10000 for the best short story every week. You can post your stories there also... Its a cool 250 dollars.. Try.. by the way nice story.. great going...

Ankur Shanker said...

[Shreyas] Thanks a lot for taking out some time and writing an insightful comment on this post. Well I'm already acting on your advice and I think I am improving with every new story. By the way all the best for your JEE... you'll do great in it. Thanks for visiting though.

Ankur Shanker said...

[Raji] Thank you for the suggestion and keep visiting :-)


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